my mentor posts!!

     Click here to see the post I picked from Zarrin's blog!!!!!!!!!

          I feel like this post shows a really good retell but not the whole thing is a retell. She really gets into detail about how she feels about this book. The things I might like to try like Zarrin did are... give a quick retell, put lots of big words, how i got introduced to the book, how i feel about certain characters in the book, how i feel about the certain decisions that the author made and more. This is only one of the great posts written by Zarrin, but this one really caught my eye because of the position it was written in, and how "attracttive" she made it look. I give props to her because of all the thought and effort she put into this post, and the feeling as well. Now I need to add these into my next posts!!!!

     Click here to see the post I picked from Keiame's blog!!!!!!!!!!!!

          This is absolutly my favorite postby Keiame! I love how in the beginning she gives astraight forward view of the book when she first picked it up, but then she gets into how her opinion changed! I also love how she connects characters together to show that one person would be attracted to someone with the same, but better, characteristics than the last. She also uses bigger words!!!! I need to do thatt!! Keiame puts a lot of thought and feeling into this post and I really enjoyed reading this. I also like how she didnt judge the book by its cover when she looked at the happy and sad face. :) :(

     Click here to see the post I picked from Janee's blog!!!!!!!!!!!!!

          This post is from two months ago but it really stood out as I was looking through Janee's posts. I love how she includes the amazing story of how she quietly took the book from her sister's room. It shows that she was already interested in the book before she began to read it. I got hooked into the post from the first line. I dont really include how I came upon the book but the next time I do, I'll be sure to put in as much detail, thought and feeling as Janee did. This post was so interesting and I will try to apply that to all of my posts from now on.

          These are my allstar mentor posts!! I hope you can get the same kide of influence as I did! :)